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Many tanks to *KaiThePhaux and ^NikiVandermosten for the feature. Many tanks for you~

My Round 2 entry into TOFA 2010, hosted over at

The theme for the second round was "One wish" and thus we had to make a 30 second - 10 minute animation in 18 days centered around that theme.

I wanted to do something different since i've heard the others using genie's and what not. So here's the story of Bear Bear, who's only wish is to be loved~

Feel free to pass on critique on the animation side of things, ah needs improvements~

Also, there are a total of 10 OC cameos, see if you can spot'm all~

Royality free music provided by Kevin MacLeod: [link]

Sound effects by Soundsnap: [link]

TOFA 2010 Hosted by [link]

TOFA 2010 Sponsored by ADOBE
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Daily Deviation

Given 2010-08-13
TOFA 2010 R2: Bear Bear by *Zeurel "I choose this Deviation because it really speaks to the child in your heart. You remember your first stuffed animal, and it's really interesting seeing it from the bear's point of view. The animation style is just so original and smooth, it's like watching a movie. The entire sequence is so well-done, and the music, so fitting, that I really believe it deserves this Daily Deviation. Simply brilliant work." ( Suggested by KaiThePhaux and Featured by NikiVandermosten )
I'm not just giving you all 5 stars because all of your works are amazing, I'm giving you 5 stars because this could be your best creation yet.

Josh, your animation skills are top caliber, and between characters like this stuffed bear and Black Ace, you could bring a new level of horror to flash animations. The dream sequence felt like it was the reality at the time, due to the behaviors of Ashley and how probable that note could of been in reality. The opening alone leading to the bear's arrival at Ashley's house was filled with dramatic suspense, and I loved the way you had characters communicate through the spasmodic text method implemented in this film. Overall, this flash replicates a nightmare that most kids have, but with such dead on precision that it deserves a special mention.

Vision: You took a common nightmare and made it seem real, that's pretty impressive by any means.
Originality: The musical scores from Kevin are so perfect for this movie, it's almost as if they were made for it. Plus the opening part was pretty unique, compared to most "The parent arrived at home with a new toy" stories.
Technique: I love your animation technique, it's gorgeous, fast paced, and filled with emotion. Character movements seem natural and the positioning always gives viewers the perfect angle for watching.
Impact: Haunting, mesmerizing, gorgeous, brilliantly devised, I could keep adding more words to describe the impact of the film, but the end point is still the simple over-exaggeration of how amazing this flash is.

These shorts that you've been doing recently show amazing originality and great style, and I hope you keep making more fantastic films like this in the future. :)
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Critique by RyuuKiba Aug 1, 2010, 3:07:46 PM
Top notch animation is something I have come to expect from your animations and this is no let-down. Despite the undisputable quality of this short I have a few comments, some of which are a bit subjective so don't take them as a critique to your skills.

Chase sequence montage From what I see in your style, you like to go into detail within the movement of your characters, which is great for the long dramatic bits of your scenes, but sometimes make your battle and chase scenes feel a bit slow and "cumbersome". Making more cuts within the chase and even some hyperfragmenting (making lots of small cuts throughout the scene) could really help pick up the pace and even do good to the already palpable suspence and fear.
Musical SFX As to incidential sounds like punches, running, and the like, your choice is quite good, but adding certain musical "umph" to certain little events within a scene could punch up the story and emotion of what's happening. I'm not saying you didn't do this at all, but some more strings in a crescendo or some sudden "punches" of different instruments in fortissimo would help accentuate fear, or the suspence that the thing is catching up or relentless in its pursuit.
Expressions You have always been great in the expressions you animate and your exceptionally good in making creepy/psychotic smiles. Though I don't know if you purposely put them in, but the kid's expressions when the bear isn't beside him and is painting creepy stuff seem a bit too comical for the scene that is unfolding... if this was deliberate and you wanted to lower the fear factor a bit then you did well. If not that's something you can surely fix next time ^^.

Besides what I commented the whole thing is awesome, entertaining, and gets the job done. I only put 4 stars in originality cause well, it's not exactly the first or second time I see a story about a traumatized toy going nuts... but it's not like I have seen too much of it either.
Well done and once more, awesome animation ^^
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AetherIsWeeping Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New Deviant
Im scared of my stuffed animals now O^O
GummyBearsYUM Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015   Digital Artist
poor bear o.0
Lobie5 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...WHOA. :O_o:
hermafrodite Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
that  was so sweet and scary at the same time
GeneralWhipcream Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Awesome animation! :D
BrandMChaos Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015
Ralts: All he wished for was to be loved T-T 
Salarch Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yea ;;
Fuchsworld Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015
I don't havewords! Its was amazing!
XxZelda-de-katxX Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
wow i remember watching this on youtube, and i was trying to find who made it! it's soo awesome!!!
Astronovi Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Student General Artist
That..gave me goosebumps...Wonderfully put together animation, golly I love it! *looks at stuffed animal on my bed* @_@
AkidoHanaha Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
........... We are now afraid of stuffed animals
Astronovi Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015  Student General Artist
xDDD Agreed!
luciusAndmyia Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
bubblvicous Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Student
It is like Chukie all over again!
wolfy799artists1 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Student Digital Artist
It's like chucky all over again O_O .... 
WFPO5Ax3 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Student General Artist

was the worst


BUT THIS WAS WONderful oh my god
Muffinz01 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
OMG i saw this on youtube and i totally didn't know you made this!
It's such an amazing piece, let me tell you, and i enjoyed every second of it ]]
PuddlyPuffAJ Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
creepy but cool Favorites Icon 3D 
ScarletnightFeguna Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
 a little girl finds a toy bear in the rain, and love him like no other, mainly because she's ALL ALONE..and at a UNGRATEFUL ADOPTION HOME... hides the the head Mistress doesn't take it,but find it STEALS HER the girl gets adopted..and the bear fight to grt to her...and will she live  OR NOT?!

and it's request
TeddyMedley Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2015
Can I make a story based on your request?
ScarletnightFeguna Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DODsteveCatnipRay666 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Student Filmographer
i will love him! forever and ever and Ever And EVer ANd EVER AND EVER AND EVER!! Twilight Sparkle HI, GIRLS. animated icon 
KarafuruNatariDango Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
Oh my god this was so intense I literally almost had my nose on the screen....AMAZING :happybounce: 
Clawedfrog Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Still one of my favourite short animated films. You have created such a unique style in your work, it's just so easy to tell if its your content!
11Doctors Featured By Owner Edited Jan 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess she couldn't "bear" it any longer! :D Such a wonderfully constructed flash!
TillDeathofTime Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this would make a GREAt video game ohmygod
Tachiagaru Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
Bit spooky for me but i love how you've made the animation ayh.
Great job on this.
Livsam12 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
This was amazing art and horror.I give it 5 stars.You were focioused on the setting and everything.Bravo
N1CK0L1E Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
O My GARSH! this is gonna give me Nightmares!!! 

You did a good job tho... in a creepy way. :0
commando5017 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow... creepy. but very good! nice work
electrichedgehog09 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I have a plush animal Thats also named Bear-Bear, and I still sleep w/ ironic. I love the animation
Birishimi Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014   Digital Artist
O             -                O

InsideTheFro Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Well I won't look at my stuffed animals the same way ever again...I am a dummy! 
HarrySaxon1234 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It was cute.. then it was scary
Katieladybuggie Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
for some reason... i think this is like slender... i don't know why
sajadmohassan Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
dude, we know you use adobe flash
but there no point to put adobe logo in preloader
Zeurel Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Professional Filmographer
there IS when it's a stipulation of the comeptition
sajadmohassan Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
oh okay
vanillablizzard Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh, I love this. It's... i DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY... but what I would have TOTALLY said would be "Oh my god, Bear bear. I went to the goddamn bathroom can I not leave you for one minute??"
thunderboltthewolf15 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
love it!!!
Squeakythemouse Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
You're really really good at this.   I wish I was able to animate half as good as you.
EllyCooArts Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
SuperGamerBros-Zach Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
PurpleMambo Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That was...different. I loved it, and I trust my lovey knows I love her...I've had her with me every night for 13+ years.
Awesome animation, btdubs. Love it.
The-Hero-Of-Thyme Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Student Artist
;-; my name is Ashley too. *hugs own teddy* nooooo~ 
aniki91344 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
And here I thought overly obsessed girlfriends were already bad enough...
EnvyFangurl07 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's so deep in meaning so creepy and sad 
twoeliz Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
well thats is really crappy...:iconwhattheplz:
snowiinq Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I liked it. And its ok, I didn't want to sleep tonight..... o.o
brittney006 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013   Artist
I Wish'd I Had Bear Bear, I Would Loved Him Like No Other ^.^ This Really Made Me Cry Hard Because, Its Sad Not Being Loved
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